Thursday, February 04, 2010

My new "baby"

Far from done...
I'd appreciate any cooents/ritiques about the style/colors/look, as well as for the contents of any of the pages that look like they are more or less "done".

www.lausannedoula.com

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I haven't read all the FAQ yet, but I think it looks great. I love the tree on the right side. The first part of "About Me" is cut off for me. It says "out Me" but maybe that's just mine. I love the pic of you and Ivy and of course your prices mean nothing to me, foreign currency and all, but the break down looks good. I was thinking the large amount of white makes it look a bit less done, but note sure what else to do so as not to lose the nice tree design. I'll let you know if I come up with anything. I love the D with the baby too!

Ali said...

I, too, love the "D" - awesome! I don't see the first two white boxes until I click on the local or online button, and then I just see a tiny sliver of the bottom of the first two boxes. Love the colors, though!

Anonymous said...

In FAQ, the 3rd line down- research is spelled wrong. 4th line you have pre-natal instead of prenatal, not sure if that is intentional or not.

What about my husband? has a . just before it and there is a floating . just above What does a doula do to help me cope with labor?

What if I want an epidural?...2nd paragraph, 1st line-you have tme instead of time.

Correction to my previous comment - instead of About Me, I see "ut Me" and that is the first tab I see, except when I click Online Resources, then I see a 1st tab that is almost completely overlapped with green and the 2nd tab says "out Me"

Looks good! Hope that helps!
Leta